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Hey everyone, as I'm sure you're well aware the story wasn't sent out yet.  Still adding to it - want to make sure it's as good as possible.  Hoping to get it out tomorrow.  Still hoping to get both stories out this month, but if worst comes to worst, then only Genealogy will be released - I would rather put out one really fleshed out story!

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Just a guy who has a thing for muscular girls and the concept of women becoming more than what they are.

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nickolai1 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
 I read your thoughts on where you were taking MKB and Brawnified World and I had a few comments. 

First I would say I am a fan of your stories like "Tiny Tiffany", "Jessica and Trent" and especially "Big Things Come in Small Packages".  I love your depictions of women exhibiting superhuman strength and showcasing their strength in juxtaposition with that of mere men and machines.  I think that is one of the best ways to demonstrate their utter superiority.

Having said that I would like to see more of Cheryl and Lily in BW3.  They are clearly what is the future of what women will become and I think time should be dedicated to showing that.  Having Lily lift a building, TADA!, is ok but I would prefer to see her or Cheryl in action bending guns, with bullets bouncing off of them and running faster then their getaway cars thwarting a bank robbery that the police were helpless to stop.  Maybe one of them walks in on a convenient store robbery and the young punks have no idea how their luck just changed for the worse.  Or perhaps one of them is traveling abroad and happen to be in the right place at the right time to catch an rpg or contain a grenade blast in their bare hands to foil a terrorist plot.  After she has walked through a see of bullets and tossed a few guys around like rag dolls, she leaves them tied up in their own guns or metal rungs from around the building to await being arrested by the authorities. 

I think situations like these are a good vehicle to 1) show their utter superiority over men and their machines and 2) create a little bit of conflict in the gvt's minds - grateful for their help yet still uncomfortable with the existence of women with such impossible capabilities.  I think that would be awesome. 

Oh and don't have Lily Drain Cheryl's powers.  Come on man! That only reduces the number of super women in this world.  Why on earth would we want that?

On MKB.  Well this one seems to be a slow grind to super strength although we don't have an indication of how strong she will become.  Punishing her son in the form of just getting bigger falls short to me unless she isn't able to do things like grounding him from using his car by lifting it off the ground and putting it on blocks, or putting his game console and games in a closet behind a giant iron vault or something that is impossible for him to move yet he witnesses her lift easily with one hand when she needs something.  If her strength is not there yet, then the next question is when will she be?

Those are my thoughts buddy, but I do beg of you one thing.  Don't have Lily steal / siphon Cheryl's strength.  We need more, NOT fewer super women and we need to see Cheryl come out with some amazing feats of her own.  Preferably doing things of the sort you mentioned in the debate in the classroom:  Lifting vehicles out of the way, clearing roads and ripping open cars/trucks freeing people during accidents.  Lifting derailed rail cars and perhaps even blowing out the fires from the combustible oil they are carrying saving towns and foiling crime / robberies.  That's the good stuff!  
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UnknownUsername333 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
Maybe you could release a scrapbook collection or something, similar to your smash words releases of old stories, for those who are curious about the scrapbook but are unwilling to pay $8 per story.
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That is an interesting idea.  Believe it or not, I don't really think my scrapbook has much monetary value at all.  It's just supposed to be cool little perk for 'hardcore' fans.  I do realize that it is a bit pricey due to being effectively $16/month.  If in the future I accumulate enough worthwhile scraps that I would feel fine releasing them for a fee, I might do that - but right now I wouldn't really feel right doing so. 
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menulight Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
about the poll,

Since we all like muscular women, she grows, she's sexier. So, sex appeal, seems not a good option to me. :) 
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MagnusMagneto Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
Sorry for the late response, I somehow missed this!  By sex appeal, I'm referring more to facial beauty, breast size, hip/waist ratio, etc.  Obviously unrealistic for those things to change, but this is a game where a girl grows taller and stronger after one workout!
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Jonesy34 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Hey, Suggestion for the Girlfriend FMG game. You should add the option to compare your chest/pecs with her.
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MagnusMagneto Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
Sorry for the late response, I somehow missed this!  I am actually planning on having a pec comparison someday.  I haven't really bothered with it yet because I am unsure if I'm going to explicitly describe breasts (and have a way to change them) or just leave those to the reader's imagination.
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Jonesy34 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Good Point. Personally, I'd prefer explicit breast description, but that's just me.
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Lupus743 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Unfortunately, I deleted my emails about the newest Patreon story because I didn't realize that there'd be no other way to view it. Sucks, really.
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MagnusMagneto Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Hey,

There should be a message in your Patreon inbox still (unless you deleted it there as well) on the Patreon website in the top-right corner, if you mouse over the profile picture image there's a dropdown menu.  A very stupid place for them to put the messages, but, that's where it is!

If you have deleted your Patreon message as well, let me know and I will get you a copy of the story!
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